Diamante poem

Tree

Fresh, Tall

Growing, Changing, Waving

Thick, Green, Bee, Honey

Photosynthesizing, Shining, Rising

Colorful, Beautiful

Flower

Sources

http://www.123rf.com/photo_9651004_eco-tree-isolated-on-white-background-vector-illustration.html

http://masunyoananda.blogspot.kr/2011_03_13_archive.html#.UgxH19JQbIc

Travel to Fraser island

Travel to Fraser island

      Hello, I'm Doyon. Today, I'm going to write a photo essay. This photo essay is about my travel to Fraser island.

Fraser explorer tours bus( http://www.4hours1000places.com/1-of-1000-fraser-island-australia/)

      We took a ship from Hervey bay to go to Fraser island. The ship was kind of old. There were many people in the ship. There were many sand inside of the shop. It smelled like dust and sand, but I liked it. It took 2 hours to go. When we arrived, we took a bus. It also had many sand on the seat and floor, but because of the air conditioner I couldn't smell anything, so I liked the bus, too.

Lake Wabby (http://craigv.us/australia/index.htm)

     We went to Lake Wabby by bus. The bus stopped at the desert. We had to walk in the  desert. The sand in the desert was very hot. Before we reached the lake, there was a slope. It was full of hot & sandpaper like sand. I tried to run but I couldn't, because the sand was too hot. When I reached Lake Wabby. I put my feet in the lake. The lake was very cool. It had green color water. There were some fish in the lake. Fish were bigger than my hand.

Eli Creek (http://theeternaltraveller.wordpress.com/tag/lake-birrabeen/)

      Our family took a bus and we went to Eli Creek. When we arrived at Eli Creek, we didn't swim in the Creek, because we smelled an odor. It smelled like a dead body. There was some dirty things in the creek, so I didn't like Eli Creek.

Dingoes (http://www.nprsr.qld.gov.au/parks/fraser/dingo-faqs.html)

      When we were going to Lake Mackenzie by bus, we saw 2 dingoes on the beach. A dingo   is a free-roaming dog. It attacks people, so we just stayed on the bus. The dingo had brown fur and an inverted triangle shaped face. It had triangle shaped ears. It look similar to a dog. It wasn't big. 

Lake Mackenzie(http://www.subaruforester.org/vbulletin/f114/fraser-island-queensland-australia-52833/)

      We arrived at Lake Mackenzie in 2 o'clock. This lake was very clean. The lake was blue. It was a similar to the sky. It had sand around lake. The sand was very white. My mom and I went into the lake. It wasn't really deep, so I walked to middle of the lake, the it became very deep and I couldn't see inside of the water. I enjoyed it. 

A wreck Maheno (http://www.panoramio.com/photo/6875003)

      On the beach, we saw a wreck the color of the wreck was kind of brown & red, because it was rusty. I couldn't smell anything. We were not allowed to touch the wreck. The wreck was very big. It was big as cruise ship. I liked it.

Eurong beach resort (http://www.tripadvisor.co.kr/Hotel_Review-g255078-d625722-Reviews-Eurong_Beach_Resort-Fraser_Island_Queensland.html)

      After the all travel, we came to Eurong beach resort. It was very clean. There was swimming pool. Swimming pool was very clean. It looked like Lake Mackenzie. Dinning room was very big & clean. I liked Eurong beach resort.

       I liked Lake Mackenzie most. If you have time to travel, I hope you to travel Fraser island. It is very cool sand island. I hope you enjoyed my photo essay.

Persuasive letter

Persuasive Letter

                                                                                      Doyon Kim

Korea 

Dear. Parents who have kids

     I'm writing this letter because I believe that parents should not let their kids to play with smartphones. Many experts like Dr. Justin Coulson and Mr. Park ( smartphone expert), for example agree with me. I will explain reasons for this and give facts to support my opinion. 

     The first reason is because it isn't good for kids' brain's development. There are statistics to show this is true.  According to the reserach done by Prof. Lee, kids using smartphone consistently had late brain development.
(http://article.joins.com/news/article/article.asp?total_id=10351161&cloc=olink|article|default)

  

     The second reason is because it causes problem to kids' eyesight and eyes. There are facts to show this is true. It has been discovered that kids who use smartphone consistently had 
decreased visual acuity and dry eye.
(http://www.hankyung.com/news/app/newsview.php?aid=201212140171i)

     The final reason is because it causes many troubles like finger arthritis, forward head posture and carpal tunnel syndrome after they grow up. There is data to show this is true. According to research, using smartphone causes finger arthritis, forward head posture and carpal tunnel syndrome.

finger arthritis(http://www.dt.co.kr/contents.html?article_no=2012120402019957788002) 

forward head posture (http://www.anewsa.com/detail.php?number=523467&thread=09r02)

carpal tunnel syndrome (http://www.anewsa.com/detail.php?number=523467&thread=09r02)

     As you can see, letting kids use smartphones are not good for kids. Based on my arguments, I hope you will consider my point of view parents shouldn't let their kids use smartphones, because it causes many problems to their kids.

Sincerely,

Doyon Kim.

Sky land

Sky land

     Seventy years ago, humans had made a land in the sky. Land in the sky was called 'sky land'. Sky land was divided in three continents. There were South sky land, Middle sky land and North sky land. South sky land was famous with sky scrapers. Middle sky land was famous with department stores and amusement parks. North sky land was famous with schools. Sky land looked same as the Earth. It looked safe for 65 years, but it isn't safe anymore. It is shaking and some are already gone to the Earth. I would like to tell you some stories about this.

      Five years ago, our family was taking a trip to South sky land. It was really peaceful. We were having fun. During the trip, we noticed some movement of the land, but we thought that we are too sensitive, so we just enjoyed our trip. Unfortunately, the land cracked and fell to the Earth. My mom was on that land. She fell to the Earth with the land. We found her in South America. She didn't die, but she lost her memory, so we brought her to the hospital. She is still at hospital.

   

     Three years ago, there was another accident. My mom,dad, sister and I were going to the amusement park. There was no news about cracked land or shaking land, so we thought it was safe to go to the amusement park, but it wasn't safe. When we almost arrived at the amusement park, we saw a terrible situation. The land was cracked and some land fall to the Earth, because of that many people died. There were many reporters there. After this accident, we didn't go to amusement park.

     Third story is related to our school. Two years ago, it was a normal day. I took a shower, had breakfast, brushed my teeth, packed the bag and went to school. At 1st period, I noticed some movement.At 3rd period, my friend also noticed movement. At morning tea time, I was playing football with my classmate. When we started to play football, there was an announcement from the speaker, but we didn't hear the announcement, because we were too busy with playing football. After five minutes, the teacher came to us and yelled at us. We didn't know what's happening, so my friends just walked after the teacher. After 10 seconds I realized that it was because of the cracking, when I look at back to tell my friends, but they were gone. When I escaped from our school I cried for five hours. 

     Because of those three accidents, I started to fix the land. I don't want to see people die. I've been fixing land for two years. I'm fixing the land with my friends, Tommy, Jacob and Jackson. We fixed Esole city, which is located in South sky land. 

Today, they went to Cleve city, which is located in South sky land, because there was an accident. It was happened at Mrs. Grayson's house. The land, which is located under Mrs. Grayson's house, had been cracked, so Mrs. Grayson's son has gone to the Earth and Mrs. Grayson went to the Earth to find his son. We put the land together and we put a rope on the land. We tied the rope to a fake cloud. After that we searched for Mrs. Grayson's son with Mrs. Grayson.

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