Sunday, August 4, 2013

Sky land

Sky land


     Seventy years ago, humans had made a land in the sky. Land in the sky was called 'sky land'. Sky land was divided in three continents. There were South sky land, Middle sky land and North sky land. South sky land was famous with sky scrapers. Middle sky land was famous with department stores and amusement parks. North sky land was famous with schools. Sky land looked same as the Earth. It looked safe for 65 years, but it isn't safe anymore. It is shaking and some are already gone to the Earth. I would like to tell you some stories about this.

      Five years ago, our family was taking a trip to South sky land. It was really peaceful. We were having fun. During the trip, we noticed some movement of the land, but we thought that we are too sensitive, so we just enjoyed our trip. Unfortunately, the land cracked and fell to the Earth. My mom was on that land. She fell to the Earth with the land. We found her in South America. She didn't die, but she lost her memory, so we brought her to the hospital. She is still at hospital.
   

     Three years ago, there was another accident. My mom,dad, sister and I were going to the amusement park. There was no news about cracked land or shaking land, so we thought it was safe to go to the amusement park, but it wasn't safe. When we almost arrived at the amusement park, we saw a terrible situation. The land was cracked and some land fall to the Earth, because of that many people died. There were many reporters there. After this accident, we didn't go to amusement park.

     Third story is related to our school. Two years ago, it was a normal day. I took a shower, had breakfast, brushed my teeth, packed the bag and went to school. At 1st period, I noticed some movement.At 3rd period, my friend also noticed movement. At morning tea time, I was playing football with my classmate. When we started to play football, there was an announcement from the speaker, but we didn't hear the announcement, because we were too busy with playing football. After five minutes, the teacher came to us and yelled at us. We didn't know what's happening, so my friends just walked after the teacher. After 10 seconds I realized that it was because of the cracking, when I look at back to tell my friends, but they were gone. When I escaped from our school I cried for five hours. 

     Because of those three accidents, I started to fix the land. I don't want to see people die. I've been fixing land for two years. I'm fixing the land with my friends, Tommy, Jacob and Jackson. We fixed Esole city, which is located in South sky land. 

Today, they went to Cleve city, which is located in South sky land, because there was an accident. It was happened at Mrs. Grayson's house. The land, which is located under Mrs. Grayson's house, had been cracked, so Mrs. Grayson's son has gone to the Earth and Mrs. Grayson went to the Earth to find his son. We put the land together and we put a rope on the land. We tied the rope to a fake cloud. After that we searched for Mrs. Grayson's son with Mrs. Grayson.

click here for Ending 1
click here for Ending 2 
click here for Ending 3






2 comments:

  1. Doyon,

    This is a very creative, well-written story. I like that you added pictures to it as well. The ending links also work and are interesting.

    Keep up the great work!

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  2. Hi!I like your story overall but I wish that you would be a little bit more descriptive. Great story, by the way.

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